The majority of what you have here is good Daisy. To redraft: - Go through (using the brief) and highlight or make bold whenever you have mentioned the terminology that task 1 requires, so you can see if you have missed anything out. You need to make sure that you have talked about every single thing - Proofread it, and get rid of those enormous blank pages at the end!
Merit.
ReplyDeleteThe majority of what you have here is good Daisy. To redraft:
- Go through (using the brief) and highlight or make bold whenever you have mentioned the terminology that task 1 requires, so you can see if you have missed anything out. You need to make sure that you have talked about every single thing
- Proofread it, and get rid of those enormous blank pages at the end!
Jo